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Once there was a man named Satrajit. He was a good and noble man that was a very faithful follower of the sun god, Surya. In fact, he spent any extra time he had praying to and worshipping Surya. One day, Satrajit was taking a walk along the beach when suddenly a great wave of light passed. Satrajit was in awe when he quickly realized that it was Surya descending down upon him. Satrajit was so excited that he could barely speak.
Once there was a man named Satrajit. He was a good and noble man that was a very faithful follower of the sun god, Surya. In fact, he spent any extra time he had praying to and worshipping Surya. One day, Satrajit was taking a walk along the beach when suddenly a great wave of light passed. Satrajit was in awe when he quickly realized that it was Surya descending down upon him. Satrajit was so excited that he could barely speak.
He managed to say, “Oh great Surya! What an honor it is to
be in your physical presence. I have
prayed for this moment for my entire life.
But, I cannot make out your features because your light shines so
bright. Please give me the chance to
really see you!”
“Silly me,” said Surya, “I wear this necklace and it
intensifies my light. Let me take it off
so that my light is dimmed.” Surya took
off the necklace and continued, “Noble Satrajit, I have come because I need
your help. I know that you are a
faithful follower of mine so surely you can perform this task.”
Satrajit responded, “I am so humbled that you have selected
me to perform your duty. But what could
the great sun god possibly want from someone like me?”
“I know that you are good.
Unfortunately, I have been informed that some of my ‘followers’ are
wicked. They go around doing horrendous
things all while claiming they were of my command. I need you to identify these evil-doers and
get rid of them” Surya spoke back.
Satrajit responded weakly, “I am glad to do what you ask,
but how exactly am I supposed to do away with these wicked men?”
“I am glad you asked,” replied Surya. He handed Satrajit the necklace and went on,
“See this necklace? Not only does it
intensify my light, but it also brings good things to a good man and bad things
to a bad man. An evil man will see you
with this gem and find a way to steal it from you. Once he gets it, the gem will do the rest of
the work. All I need you to do is wear
this gem around Dwarka.”
Satrajit spoke back, “I think that I can do that! I hope I
can make you proud.”
Satrajit put the jewel around his neck and went back to
town. Right off the bat, men in the town
noticed the powerful jewel. Each time
Satrajit went to bed, he took off the necklace and placed it on his bedside
table. Every morning he would wake up
and it would be gone. He would then
proceed to find the necklace and the unlucky man that received bad fortune. One man was found torn to pieces by a
lion. A bear killed another. Each day he would find another man dead
because of the necklace. These men were
liars, cheaters, thieves, and murderers.
After 10 days of this, Satrajit was growing weary with all
the death he had been surrounded by.
Surya appeared once more, announcing that Satrajit’s duties were
finished. Surya offered the jewel to
Satrajit as “thank you” for his obedience.
Satrajit was hesitant because he knew envious men would look to steal
it. So, Surya placed a spell on the
jewel that no man with evil intentions could come within 100 feet of the
jewel. Satrajit was safe and the jewel
brought him good luck for many years.
The Jewel (Pixabay)
Author's Note: Satrajit received that jewel from the sun god in the original story, but was not given a mission. Instead, he grew worried that the jewel would be taken from him so he passed it on to his brother. His brother was killed by a lion, who was then killed by the Bear King. The Bear King gave the jewel to his son. Satrajit's brother had never returned and rumors were formed. Krishna and his men went to find what happened to him. Krishna made it to the Bear King's cave and saw the jewel. He and the Bear King fought until Krishna eventually won and returned home. I decided to just focus on the jewel and change up the story by having the sun god give Satrajit a mission.
Bibiography: "The Syamantaka Jewel" by C.A. Kincaid. Link.
Logan,
ReplyDeleteI love the photo you chose for this story, it is beautiful and goes so well with your layout! I feel as if you edited this story well before you posted it, because I am truly unable to find any spelling or grammar errors. Your authors note was also quite helpful for me to see your changes and understand the original story, as this is not one I have read before. Great job!
Hey Logan.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. Your author’s note was really good at explaining the differences in the story and the original. I like how you decided to change the focus to just the jewel. It was a really good story and I hope to read more of your stories. Have a good rest of the semester.
Hey Logan! I liked your story and the way it was written. The dialogue flowed really well so good job on that! I haven't read the original story that you based your story off of, so I found your author's note really useful. Also, your title is great and the picture you used is super pretty! Great job overall! :)
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